“’Cause then we’d have money again,” the girl went on. “I think it was stupid to just quit.”
YOU THINK THIS G
SHUT UP STUPID HEAD!
Thumbs Up It PG-13!
@Flygon: Yeah no kidding! For all the Pokemon world's advanced research, they are very lacking in some areas of knowledge...
I really loved it! I always love stories that have you beginning with the sightless world the baby has. it was truly and absolutely amazing!
This is different. Not morbid at all... The most dangerous thing here was the Ghastly's Lick... Has Butterfree gone... Soft?
Reply: Seriously, I'm all for joking about my tendency to be morbid, but this tiresome idea that clearly I am simply incapable of writing anything non-morbid even when nothing calls for morbidity is just annoying.
"produce near enough milk" should be "produce nearly enough milk".
I am confident that I am not the only person whose first thought was, "Aww, baby Spirit is so cute." Not to mention those Gastly, probably one of the most adorable scenes in the whole fic.
"She did not know that the creature was the one who had made her that way when she was still in her mother’s womb, or that he had taken her to test her."
God, I'm so glad I'm not the only one that made some pokemon mammals. -.-
I never trusted that darn daycare >.>