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I've been trying to keep up with your updates, so imagine my joy when I saw the story! Really wonderful, it kinda makes me feel bad about those first few Pokémon I catch just to have more than my starter on my team at the very beginning. :( I'm going to favorite the page it's on, so I can keep coming back to read it. :D
Oh jesus. I got Yellow for Christmas this year and decided that my team would consist of Pikachu, Flareon, Blastoise, Venusaur, Nidoqueen… and Butterfree. I use Butterfree so often in my main series games that it never really occurs to me that maybe it really isn't the best permanent team member, but I use it anyway. I had to specifically find good type advantages to send it out on when I faced the Elite Four… had to teach it Psychic and Mega Drain in order to keep it from fainting all the time… This story is so painfully true. (Except I never end up ditching Pokémon even if it means I reach the Elite Four with a Zigzagoon.)
It also made me want to start over Yellow even though I just beat it and do an experiment where I take a Butterfree and, through careful use of saves and leveling so as not to overlevel, find out the approximate point at which it loses its usefulness. But since I just beat Yellow idk if I can bear to part with this file.
Sky: This is not a retelling of something that happened to me on an actual game. It does have elements derived from personal experience - I did ditch my first Butterfree in Yellow at level 28 after thinking it was the best thing ever when it beat Brock, and wanted to train it up again but never got around to it - but ultimately this is a piece of fiction about a real Pokémon trainer with a real Butterfree, not someone playing a video game, so asking what game it is or what level the Butterfree was doesn't really make sense. It takes place in Kanto, and the Butterfree was left on the PC at some unspecified point before the trainer battled Blaine. There is no game, and even if levels were to be interpreted as an in-world feature, I don't know the Butterfree's exact level any more than I know the names of the trainer's friends. They don't have any significance to the story, so why would I decide on something specific for them?
Butterfree certainly didn't enter the Hall of Fame the time the trainer went and became champion, and I don't think a trainer in the Pokémon world would actually keep battling the Elite Four over and over again after they're already the champion. I suppose the trainer might have gone on to other regions, or been de- and then rethroned, but it is doubtful the Butterfree battled, what with the whole not-battling thing, so no, it was probably not entered in the Hall of Fame.
Ymedron: Well, the story wouldn't be very interesting if the Butterfree were having a grand old time on the PC. :P
I don't really have a single consistent headcanon - the box isn't like this "for me" so much as it is like this for the purposes of this story, because this story is most interesting that way. You might as well tell J.K. Rowling "Well, I don't think magic works that way" - of course you can prefer different magic systems, but ultimately magic is fictional either way, and Rowling is nowhere claiming the Harry Potter system is The Way Magic Works, just that it's how it works in Harry Potter. My stories all vary pretty wildly when it comes to anything that pertains to the interpretation of the world (barring those that explicitly happen in the same universe, like TQftL and Scyther's Story/The Fall of a Leader); they each just use the interpretation that seems most interesting for that story. If I were to think up an interesting story sometime that would call for the PC to be like your interpretation, I'd write that.
Blastoise Fortooate: I'm kind of surprised by how many readers just see the ending as unambiguously happy. Here I was thinking people would think it's stupidly indecisive.
KuroRekkuza: I had a Haunter on my permanent team in Crystal, and I was actually devastated to find I couldn't cancel trade evolutions when I traded everything over to Gold so I could restart Crystal. It just wasn't the same when she was a Gengar. D:
Thanks for your kind comments, everyone. Man, this was a whole lot better received than I thought it would be. Maybe all the time I spent on it just made me jaded. Or that contest I judged just made me think way, way too hard about one-shots.
So, did the Butterfree enter the Hall of Fame or what? Is this FR/LG? What level was the Butterfree?
The butterfree-story made me cry like many of your past ones have. However, to me the pokemon box is such a different place as it is for you - I always think that the pokemon are on a great enclosure, training and eating and sleeping and having downtime.
But then again, Im rotating about five boxes worth of pokemon, so thinking that they all have to rot for months on end in a pokeball is very… Crushing to think about.
I was also expecting the butterfree to do something evil, but Im glad that for once there isn't any sinister things going on.
Butterfree, you managed to make a story with a happy ending that is till somehow sad! This is an amazing accomplishment.
This is absolutely beautiful… this makes you realize that Pokémon can be more than just a computer program, that you can truly be connected to them, like they're living beings.
It reminds me of my Haunter, just hanging in my PC until I'm able to trade him to evolution, because he hasn't been rising to the challenge of defeating trainers. But he's my favorite Ghost, so you know what, I think I'm gonna go train him and have fun, and he'll evolve when he evolves.
I managed to get through the Elite Four for the first time thanks to my Butterfree. But I do recall having to swap out some Pokemon for HM Slaves, and I regret dumping mine in the PC for a good amount of time.
In reference to how the Butterfree in your writing normally didn't do well, my Butterfree is the same way, sadly, so much relation there.
Good job, keep on writing!
That was fantastic. When I played through my copy of Leafgreen a while back I switched my Butterfree out for a Mankey or something like that, quite early on, and now I feel all guilty about it :( Really well written, thanks for posting it.
This is excellent. It really shows that there is a bond between the trainer and pokemon more than that of always trying to win. It shows that the Butterfree has feelings too.
Still Ten. Matt Smith is hilarious, but I really like Ten's relative humanity, and my absolute favorite episodes are all Ten episodes (Midnight, The Waters of Mars, and The End of Time), although The Girl Who Waited comes close. Moments like returning to save the Mars people anwyay and justifying it with an insane fit of megalomania, or his rant when he realizes he's going to have to die to save Wilfred, are the reason I like fiction, damn it.
Oh, okay.
So which of the three new-Who Doctors is your favourite?
I've watched them too, but there was only time to watch the first four series (and the specials) in that single week. We literally finished The End of Time something like half an hour before I had to leave for my flight back to Iceland.
Then when I was home I picked up with series five with Shadey. And eventually rewatched series 1-4.
You've only seen the first four new seasons? That means no Matt Smith! You don't know what you're missing, Butterfree.
(Oh hay and my spam Pokemon is a Butterfree too)
As in what is a Week of Centrifuges and TARDISes, or what is a TARDIS? Assuming the former, since you seem to at least know it has to do with Doctor Who, basically I stayed at Dannichu's place for a week, where she showed me (most of) series 1-4 of the new Doctor Who, and I showed her ReGenesis (possibly my favorite TV show ever, which contains biological lab work montages that often prominently feature centrifuges). The centrifuges became something of an inside joke (we'd go YAAAAY CENTRIFUGE whenever one appeared), and on one of my last days there she drew me an absolutely wonderful picture of a Pikachu, a Butterfree, a TARDIS and a centrifuge, captioned "Dannichu + Butterfree's Week of Centrifuges and TARDISes".
So, in short, I'm afraid it was kind of a one-time thing. You should totally nab the concept and host a similar thing with your friends, though. Especially if you include the ReGenesis half.
Quote: .."Week of Centerfuges and TARDISes."
TARDISes.
What is this thing and how can I be involved? *wants to be involved with Doctor Who stuff*
The thing about mitochondrial DNA is that mitochondria used to be separate organisms, they replicate independently and mitochondrial DNA, as far as I know, affects only the structure of the mitochondria themselves. To propose that the DNA of organelles that used to be separate organisms like mitochondria is responsible for the whole appearance of the Pokémon seems pretty absurd. (Hence why I asked if there were examples of 'large-scale' inheritance only through the female line.)
Real-world definitions of concepts like species don't apply very clearly to the Pokémon world. The point of defining a species as a group that can interbreed is that for as long as the group can interbreed, they share a common gene pool and as such are meaningfully a unit. When Pokémon can interbreed with different Pokémon but always produce an offspring that is 100% the mother's species, that isn't what is happening; there is no meaningful mixing between, say, the Dragonite gene pool and the Salamence gene pool, even if they can breed (specifically, any mixing that occurs doesn't affect any of the factors that make an individual a Dragonite or a Salamence). So there is very definitively a meaningful sense in which no, Dragonite and Salamence are not the 'same species'; it's just not a situation that ever occurs in the real world (or, well, so I thought, anyway).
If the reference to inheritance through the female line was referring to something akin to the fact that Pokemon always hatch with the subspecies of the mother, I can think of one thing that, at least, sort of fits that.
That being Mitochondrial DNA. Mitochondria, the organelles, have their own DNA, and the DNA in any human (or most species, for that matter), is identical to the DNA in the Mitochondria of their mother [This is because Sperm have no mitochondria, but eggs do.].
Of course, Mitochondrial DNA is, I believe, non-coding, and, even if it does, relatively unimportant in terms of phenotype.
However, going back to Pokemon, it is very possible that the subspecies, which basically encompasses almost the entire phenotype, is inherited in this way by some other organelle.
Oh, and something else - I am officially referring to the different Pokemon as "subspecies". They could not interbreed if they were different species. Plus, being subspecies also explains the concepts of Egg Groups.
Thanks so much for giving feedback on my site! I took it as a learning lesson, and actually already started going through pages and rewriting sections and fixing the things you pointed out to me, so thanks! Maybe someday in the future I'll send you another request. :)
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