Tiffahno

Besides, that gets boring and Butterfree writes realistic stories. But if it really bothers you so much, E-ighty, why not write the story yourself? :}

[01/01/2010 05:45:26]

Sangheili

I don't think your idea will work with that one exception, E-ighty… Besides, that's not really in her writing style, from what I've seen, to have a seemingly invincible, perfect character.

[31/12/2009 20:55:42]

E-ighty
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Okay, fine. Make a Dragonite defeat all Pokemon except for one shiny Pokemon I like… like a Charizard???

[31/12/2009 18:16:40]

Tiffahno

Well, I don't think Curse was that morbid… but then again, I like anything dark cruel and torturous. O_o;;

Well written story, Butterfree :} I love your work!

[31/12/2009 01:56:58]

Mew

Oh.

[30/12/2009 20:57:16]

Butterfree
Admin
Website: The Cave of Dragonflies

Mew: No, I couldn't really do that; Spirit has already used a Ghost-type Curse and it was there shown completely differently, besides that it would just be a random complication that has nothing to do with anything and would say nothing of interest the one-shot hasn't said already.

[30/12/2009 20:25:24]

Sangheili

Torture makes for a good piece of fiction.

[30/12/2009 19:19:27]

Mew

Oh, yeah. i recently got super smash bros. off of virtual consol. it iz awsum! ^_^

[30/12/2009 18:44:57]

Mew

Hello, People!!!! Butterfree, very well-written one-shot. i personally think that you should put in that curse logic into TQFTL.

[30/12/2009 18:41:41]

YamiiDenryuu

"I only torture characters I like."



That's either great or, uh, something.



Then again, as someone who will torture characters regardless of whether I like them or not, perhaps I shouldn't speak.

[30/12/2009 16:12:05]

Butterfree
Admin
Website: The Cave of Dragonflies
Commenting on: 12-25-09

o.O A Dragonite defeating all Pokémon ever and never getting hurt wouldn't exactly make for a very interesting work of fiction.



Why do people always act so mortally offended when something bad happens to fictional characters? Bad things happen to fictional characters because that is what makes fiction interesting, not because the author has anything against those characters. I only torture characters I like.

[29/12/2009 19:01:35]

E-ighty
Commenting on: 12-25-09

I hate this! I want one with Dragonite not being hurt! Just one dragonite that defeats all pokemon ever! And can't be hurt!

[29/12/2009 18:49:18]

Terry. T.
Website: The major project of SPPF

As you can tell by now, I'm taking Serebii by storm, and I noticed I can re-register for tCoD. I'm not going to try unless you think I'd be decent to return. PLEASE reply.

[29/12/2009 16:56:28]

Shadow420
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Read curse… yesterday, I think it was? That was just… creepy. Although I myself have only ever used the Ghost-type Curse(and not that often), its easy to picture the loss of soul that might come with the Normal/other than Ghost-type Curse.

[28/12/2009 18:39:42]

Chaos16
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Intriguing by all means; however, I personally found it difficult to distinguish the reverse-chronological order of the Morty flashbacks. Then again, I didn't have time to read the whole thing in one sitting, so that may have been part of the problem. Regardless, great story.

[28/12/2009 02:41:05]

Mudskipper
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Wow, that was very good. It sure portrays the effects of the curse well. And I loved the morbid bits, even though I wish there was even more morbidity.

[27/12/2009 23:41:30]

Sangheili

Morbid, indeed. ._. Good thing I don't like to use Curse… Very good, otherwise.

[27/12/2009 19:40:19]

Kitsune
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Very morbid, but that's what makes it so good. =P I never thought of Curse that way, and now I'm a bit 'fraid to use it…

I could totally imagine Dragonite drawing a pentagram during that chanting…

[27/12/2009 05:33:49]

Butterfree
Admin
Website: The Cave of Dragonflies
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Maybe a little. Minus the fact that Kari is all best buddies with her Pokémon. :P They do look kind of alike in my head, but then again that's just because they're both sort of based on the Crystal girl.

[27/12/2009 00:56:56]

Scyther
Commenting on: 12-25-09

Kari kinda reminds me of May.

[27/12/2009 00:37:09]